I’m thinking about cutting the first section but idk. I think the story should start in the room he wakes up in. I split the story where I’m think of making the cut. There are other changes ill post soon.

PS Remember the story isn’t really for reading its for animation.

A man is walking down the street with a business card in hand. It is a plain white business card with black text. It reads “Eternity, 1210 East Broadway, 20th Floor” the man glances down at the card as he walks. He stops in front of a large building that has Eternity carved into the stone entrance. He looks up at the building and enters. Inside there is just a long hallway leading to an elevator he walks forward and presses the up button and the elevator opens. The inside of the elevator is covered in mirrors the man presses the button to go up to the 20th floor and waits. He leans over to a mirror and checks his teeth with a smile. The elevator dings and he steps out. Again there is just a long hallway leading to an empty desk. Sitting on the desk is a sign in sheet. He signs his name and has a seat. Shortly after he sits down a man exits a room to his right. The man is smiling and there is almost a glow about him. He nods to the man as he gets on the elevator and leaves. Above a door across from the one the man just came out of a sign reading “Next” flashes and the man walks over to the door. It slides open and he steps inside. The room is on the outer edge of the building and he glances out the windows to the street below. He turns to see a sign reading “Please stand on the platform below” he walks over and stands there. Machine arms come out from the walls and takes measurements of his arms, legs, torso and head. They disappear as sudden as the appeared and the man steps down and walks over to the window. He watches the cars and buses drive by. Behind him he hears a door open and about it the sign now reads “Enter”. He walks into the room that only has a chair in the center. The chair reminds him of a dentist chair but with more stuff attached to it. He walks over and sits down. Once his all of his weight is on the chair it engages. It straps his arms and legs down so he can only move them slightly and a helmet with a visor comes down over his head. On the visor it reading “Starting in 5, 4, 3, 2, 1… The room vanishes and the man is in complete darkness.

He opens his eyes and he is sitting in an old wooden chair. He stands up and walks toward the door that is slightly cracked. When he opens the door he is shocked at what he can see. There is a long path without walls ahead of him with what seems like sort of a neural path way with synapses firing. He walks down the path careful not to get to close to the edges. Ahead of him in notices a wall and a split in the path way, on the wall are two signs. One sign point to the left and is labeled “View All” and the one on the right says “View Random”. He looks to the left and can see an endless hallway of doors but the doors don’t seem to lead anywhere they are just door with our walls. He looks to the right and can see an elevator. Between both of the signs is a little pouch that say “Please take” he walks over and grabs inside the pouch to pull out what seems to be a touch computer. On the screen it shows two icons one is an elevator labeled “Random” the other is a door labeled “All”. He looks back towards the hallway and then again at the elevator and waives his hands at the hall of door and steps toward the elevator. He presses the Elevator icon on the computer and the door opens. He steps in and looks around There isn’t much to this elevator just a simple elevator not even as nice as the one he used to enter the building. The doors close behind him and a single light turns on. He looks down at the computer screen that he is carrying and it show the pc sliding into a slot on the wall he looks around and can see something that matches the animation on the screen he walks over and put it into the slot. At first it doesn’t want to go in and he looks at the image again and turns the pc 90 degrees and it slides right in. The slot in the wall covers and he is left standing there. He looks around for a minute and starts pushing the spot where he put the pc. He starts to give up and the area where the pc went comes to life. It seems that the elevator is covered in small squares that start to flip over all radiating from the little spot on the wall. Everything goes black except for the singel light above his head and a green square where the walls of the elevator used to stand. From the distance a females form starts to take shape. He watches as it gets closer and closer until it seems she is standing beside him. “Welcome to Eternity” she says, “I will be showing you random clips from your memory while they are being analyzed. Please stay within the green square at all times. Behind you is a chair if you would like to have a seat while I get things prepared.” He looks behind him and does find a chair and has a seat. “We are ready to being” she says, “The ages at which each memory took place will be shown before the memory begins.” She vanishes and “AGE 13″ shows on all the walls. Again they flip over like before this time he is in a child’s bedroom. Inside is just a little boy looking through a telescope at the stars. In the back ground you hear doors close and the boy turns around to watch the light in the hallway get turned off. He rushes over and turns his light off and goes back to the window where the telescope is he looks out the window and smiles he adjust the telescope downwards and pears through it. He hears the click of the light again and jumps into bed. The man leans over and looks through the telescope to see the start of a woman getting undressed. He glances at the door to see shadows moving under it. He looks back at the boy pretending to be asleep and then back through the telescope. Just as the woman is about to remove her bra he hears something behind him and the door starts to open. He tries to look through the telescope one last time but the boy moves it up to change the view to the stars and rolls back over. He reaches for it to adjust it back but his hand hits the edge of the wall. The tiles start to flip again and the man is back in the dark elevator with just the single light. He shrugs his shoulders and smiles. He looks around the empty room waiting for the next one to begin. “AGE 20″ shows on the walls and the tiles flip yet again this time he is standing on the side if the road. A homeless man is standing there and he can see a car getting off the highway at the exit. It pulls up to the stop sign where he and the homeless man wait. The window rolls down as the man walks over. He can see himself sitting in the car and hands the man some change from the cup holder. The homeless man thanks him and he rolls the window up and drives off. He nods with a smile as the walls flip back over to darkness. The woman comes back from the distance. “These next few clips will be shorter and shown from your point of view on this one wall. Please have a seat.” The man sits down as the walls flash “AGE 12″ the wall comes into focus and he can see that he was walking he points at a little girl holding an ice cream cone on the side of the road. He looks over at his friends that are with him and one of the mouths “oh yeah”. He takes off running towards the little girl and pushes the ice cream into her face causing her to drop it on the hot side walk. He keeps running and turns to point and laugh. The screen changes to black and “AGE 17″ flashes up and goes away a face of a boy is shown on the screen the boy wasn’t in the best of shape his eye was black and his nose bloody. A fist comes up from the right of the screen and knocks the boy onto the ground he jumps on the boys chest and starts beating him in the face. The screen turns to black and “AGE 20″ shows on the screens. When it comes to focus all he can see is a room empty except for beer and alcohol bottles everywhere. He looks around the room and then stands up. He glances over at a girl passed out in a chair. He walks over and feels one of her breast. She barely moves. He tries to wake her up and carries her into a room off to the side. He glance continuing to go from the room to her breast that are about to fall out of her shirt. He pushes open the door to show an empty room with just a bed he puts the girl down and goes to the door looks out to see if anyone was watching. They weren’t. He closes the door and turns the lock he starts to walk back to the bed and the screen goes blank. “AGE 16″ shows on the walls and he gets a scared look on his face and turns away. “AGE 18″ shows and he watches with a smile and longing. “AGE 7″ shows and he smiles with a tear in his eye. “AGE 23″ shows and he just sits there with an awed look on his face; each flashing through quicker than the last. The room goes dark again and the woman comes back. “There is one last thing you need to see before you’ll get the results of the analysis. I came across many memories similar to this one and felt you should see it in its entirety. “She vanishes and “AGE 27″ flashes up. It vanishes and he is standing beside an old car outside of a grocery store. He waits for a moment and he notices himself helping an old lady in a scooter style wheel chair with her groceries she has some in a cart he is pushing and some in the basket of the scooter. They walk up to the car and she opens the trunk. He starts loading groceries and she makes her way to the car door with her walker. When he finishes loading everything he can see that she left her purse in the little scooter he looks around to see if anybody is around and the lot is empty the reaches into the purse and pulls out her pocket book he takes all the cash and any credit cards that he can find and shoves it into his pocket. He puts the pocket book back into the purse and walks to the driver’s side door. He waives it in front of the window and she smiles. She rolls down her window and takes the purse she offers him some cash that she had in her pocket and he refused. She looks at him in an “Awe how sweet” manner. She pushes for him to take the money for helping her and he does in a reluctant manner. The lady drives off and he walks away. He glances back over his shoulder to see her driving off and pulls out the wad of cash he took and starts counting. The walls go to black again and the woman reappears. “I have reviewed your life through your memories and determined you have led an unrighteous life and will suffer the consequences for eternity.” She disappears and the man looks around not knowing what to do. He starts to sweat and pulls the collar of his shirt. He gets hotter and hotter. Suddenly the walls fall away and he can see himself lying in a ball on the floor. Old women are standing over him hitting him with their walkers and canes. They stop and one of the reaches out with a glass of water he tries to take is but just before he can grab it they let go and it falls and crashes on the hard stone floor. They start pointing a laughing at him. A huge demon comes by and grabs him by his leg. It drags him around a large stone. The demon looks around and smiles. It starts to take of its loin cloth and steps around to where the man is. He can’t see what is going on but can only imagine the worst. He passes out standing there and wakes up back in the room with the machinery. He removes himself from the chair and leaves through the door labeled exit. Sweat is pouring from his face and he is very paranoid about the man waiting out in the hallway. He heads to the elevator and presses the button to go down. In the elevator he takes a long look in the mirror and wipes the sweat from his face. He looks deep into his eyes. The elevator dings and he steps out and leaves the building. Once out side he takes a deep breath and smiles. He shakes off what he just saw and heads out. He steps down from the curve still thinking about what he just witnessed wondering if there is any validity to what was shown. He shakes his head and looks to his left. From now where a bus smacks into him sending him fling through the air. People rush from the bus over to him. He can see them standing over him. He looks at them and then pulls his hand up to see it covered in blood one of the people standing over him looks up and screams for help, but it is to late his eyes start to close and everything goes black.

I have decided what im going to do with my weblog. I’m going to post updated, images, ideas, and whatever else i can think of about my new short film “Eternity” (working title) I’m sorry for those who signed up for rapidshare post and the like. That is what I had planned for it but i think this will work better for me. I hope you enjoy and give me some feed back I’ll start posting things on this weds or thurs. I’ll start with the story. Enjoy.

Test

This is a test only a test i see people are signing but and i need to post more items so im setting up my G1 to make post.

This is a hand full for apps for Windows and Mac Enjoy.
I’ll try to add Details about each later.

Windows:

http://rapidshare.com/files/92267582/MacDrive_7.0.10.rar

Mac:

http://rapidshare.com/files/88928601/Mirage_Pluggins.zip
http://rapidshare.com/files/88923906/Bauhaus_Mirage_v1.5__k_.zip
http://rapidshare.com/files/88918022/iTunes_Stuff.zip
http://rapidshare.com/files/88918024/LightWave_9.zip
http://rapidshare.com/files/88918025/pathfinder.rar
http://rapidshare.com/files/88807512/Visual_Thesaurus_3.zip

Rapidshare has changed its policys. Instead of haveing 25Gbs per every 5 day period, they have changed it to 10Gbs Daily which doubles the previous max. Also, they have changed the max file size to 200Mbs instead of only 100Mbs. This is a great time for rapidshare users.

I have 7 more files that are already on rapidshare that I’m going to post. After those, I’ll just start choosing files I think would be good to post.

Enjoy and share.

9 HJSplit Files
700 Mb Movie
Nightmare Before Christmas with sound sync using Tools - Lateralus Album
Show Me the Links